My Goonies 2 Script....take a peak!!!

by **bez** » Mon Aug 01, 2005 4:09 am

Thanks matey. Means alot.

by **bez** » Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:20 am

Even more pages added.

http://www.thegoonies2.bravehost.com/TheGoonies2.txt

by **shaz** » Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:24 am

Thanks for the links Bez....I will check this out when I get chance.
The beginning that I read before was fantastic writing and got me hooked.

shaz x

by **bez** » Tue Aug 02, 2005 2:19 pm

Thanks Shaz. Put alot of effort into this lately. Been writing everyday.

For those of you that were in the process of reading my script this is were I got upto. Its about 3 quarters of the way down.

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The kids look at each other. Jack see's something isn't right.

JACK (CONT'D)
You know em?

CUT TO:

INT. LIGHTHOUSE LOUNGE - BASEMENT KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

The door swings open with a ECHOING THUD. Francis with
first map in hand enters followed by Jake who has the
second map. Papa is last to enter the room which has
been almost totally cleared out bar the large old black
mental printing press.

by **bez** » Wed Aug 17, 2005 6:29 am

I have been back off holiday for a day and I expected to come on here and see all of your replies.

But instead of getting all soppy about it I decided to carry on writing. So here you go. About another 10 pages done. Its now 100 pages strong!!!

Get reading, get posting!

http://www.thegoonies2.bravehost.com/TheGoonies2.txt

http://www.thegoonies2.bravehost.com/TheGoonies2.txt

http://www.thegoonies2.bravehost.com/TheGoonies2.txt

http://www.thegoonies2.bravehost.com/TheGoonies2.txt

by **shuckymomo** » Wed Aug 17, 2005 5:57 pm

I sure wish WB would read this script....It is the BOMB!!!! Keep it up!! It's going great!! Is it hard to come up with the puzzles??

by **bez** » Thu Aug 18, 2005 5:03 am

Thanks Shucky.

To be honest the puzzles have come to me quite easily. I just sit down with a pad and a pen and sketch out something that could be used. Then I just add to it. The basic thing I am using is that The Goonies probably wouldnt of made it through these tunnels first, but the Fratellis whether by hook or crook can.

If I am totally honest its 100 pages but I am now struggling to fill up the last 20. The ending itself will probably be about 3 or 4 pages but in between that I don't know what to do. I always said it might be 160 odd pages but it hasnt worked out that way. I might try to involve a Willy/Copperpot flashback or something.

If you got any ideas let me know. Even if they are just basic ones. Let me tell you though, if I write the ending as good as I have it in my mind you will be smiling at your computer screen when you read it.

Thanks Shucky. All the best mate.

by **bez** » Thu Aug 18, 2005 11:18 am

by **shuckymomo** » Thu Aug 18, 2005 5:11 pm

So, you set us up for a third installment?? I have to say that you did an EXCELLENT job on this script. Now, I'm going to read the whole thing in one sitting and give you a final critique!!

Keith

by **bez** » Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:55 am

Thanks Shucky. Took a year off and on to get it done but at least I got there in the end!

Can't wait for everyone to read it through and give me some feedback. Positive or negative. Cant wait!

Hopefully everyone will have a read. After all we are all Goonies fans.

Bez

by **shaz** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:51 am

*Great stuff Bez!!!!* I loved it....a thoroughly great read. It kept me hooked and made me laugh....great Goonies connections (from the movie).
I reccommend other peeps to read this..
Well done Bez :-)

shaz x

by **bez** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 9:11 am

Thanks Shaz, means alot?

You like it all? any things you didn't like or didn't understand?

bez
xxx

by **shaz** » Wed Aug 24, 2005 9:40 am

I loved it all....it kept me gripped to it too which is a big compliment because to be honest I'm not much of a reader....I very rarely read a book.

*SPOILER ALERT*

There is only one part that I wasn't sure of....where Stef says:
STEF So what you think happened to them?

I know she's talking about Brand and Andy.....but I wasn't clear on it as I read that scene.

That's all though.....it's great Bez, really. I hope you're proud of yourself.

shaz x

by **kaz00_40** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 2:54 am

Bez,

Would it be ok if I printed it out to read?

Kaz xx gooniesicon

by **shaz** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 2:57 am

I'm sure he won't mind chick....I was going to do the same but my printer is up the shoot.
(Just don't sell it on Ebay hehe!

shaz x

by **kaz00_40** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 3:01 am

shaz wrote:(Just don't sell it on Ebay hehe!

shaz x

I wouldn't dream of it

Kaz xx

by **bez** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 6:48 am

Yer print it out to your hearts delight.

Thanks for the feedback Shaz. Much appreciated. Remember when I said it could end up being 160 pages plus? haha I won't be saying that again. Once I got to 100 pages I struggled to reach 120. In fact I am very happy the One Eyed Willy return worked as well as it did because without that whole scene the script would of only been around 110 pages.

Thanks for reading everyone. I want everyone on the boards to read this script. Even if they don't like me

hehe

Cheers ears, Bez

by **shaz** » Thu Aug 25, 2005 7:01 am

I really liked that part...I wasn't expecting it.
I reccommend anyone with a little bit of spare time to read it....

shaz x

P.S. I like you...we just started out on the wrong foot :-)

by **Goonie17** » Fri Aug 26, 2005 10:15 am

Wow, nicely done Bez!

Just finished reading the script over coffee this morning. I really liked how you left the ending wide open. Nicely done incorporating the next generation of Goonies as well! A little more violent than the original, but I totally understand your reasoning behind that. I hope that you are overjoyed with your work, as this is a great script!!

by **bez** » Sat Aug 27, 2005 12:04 pm

Thanks alot. Much appreciated. I am so happy you all seemed to of liked it. Means alot to me hearing good reviews. Thanks a bunch.

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by **GoonFromKnox** » Mon Sep 12, 2005 6:03 am

Hey BEZ

I've never talked to you on here. I just recently started posting replies and such. I just read your script! Incredible. Great Job. I've read three different scripts for a possible Goonies sequel, and yours is by far the best. Great Job. Hope to hear more from ya!

By the way . . have you considered making this into Book-form? I know I would buy it.

GoonFromKnox
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by **bez** » Tue Sep 13, 2005 5:29 am

GoonFromKnox wrote:Hey BEZ

I've never talked to you on here. I just recently started posting replies and such. I just read your script! Incredible. Great Job. I've read three different scripts for a possible Goonies sequel, and yours is by far the best. Great Job. Hope to hear more from ya!

By the way . . have you considered making this into Book-form? I know I would buy it.

GoonFromKnox

Thank you for taking time out to read my script, its much appreciated.

I am glad you liked my script out of the three you have read. What are the other 2? Originalgoonies and ???????

The book form idea actually sparked my brain into thinking. It would be a fantastic project to work out. Correct the little mistakes in my script and put the script into a book. A book like which you can buy in the shop of tv programs scripts. I could maybe even include pictures that have never been released etc. Its a good idea. I wouldn't know where to start though and if anyone would buy it.

Thanks for reading and dropping a post. All the best.

bez

by **kaz00_40** » Tue Sep 13, 2005 7:57 am

Hey bez,

Just to let you know I've started to read the script and I'm loving it so far. Sorry it's taken me so long but I've been really busy.

Kaz xx gooniesicon

by **GoonFromKnox** » Tue Sep 13, 2005 9:19 am

Hey

I am still trying to locate the Web address for one of the scripts for Goonies 2. It was posted on TheGoonies.Com site quite a while ago.

The other one I found is at this address. Have you seen this one already?

http://www.redmorris.pwp.blueyonder.co. ... ayDie.html

So, yours makes the 3rd draft of a Goonies 2 script that I have read.
I will post the other as soon as I locate it

see ya

by **shaz** » Tue Sep 13, 2005 9:32 am

GoonFromKnox wrote:http://www.redmorris.pwp.blueyonder.co. ... ayDie.html

That's Andy's (theoriginalgoonie) script.
The other is Erik's from thegoonies.com

shaz x

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